What a journalist actually wants from expert comment

Most expert comment never runs. Not because the journalist ignored it, but because it gave them nothing they could use. Having spent more than a decade each on the other side of the inbox, we can tell you what separates the quote that makes the page from the one that gets deleted, and it is rarely what brands expect.

An answer to the question they actually asked

A journalist writing about small kitchens wants to know how to make a small kitchen work. They do not want a paragraph about your new range, your heritage or your showroom. Read the request twice, answer it directly in the first sentence, and only then bring in your product if it genuinely helps. If it does not fit, leave it out. A useful quote with no product mention builds more goodwill than a plug that never runs.

A point of view, not a summary

"Neutrals are timeless" is not comment. Every brand in the market could say it, which is exactly why no journalist wants it. What they want is the thing only you know: what you are seeing in orders, what customers are asking for that they were not a year ago, the mistake you watch people make every week. A specific, slightly opinionated answer from someone who clearly knows the subject is what gets quoted, and what gets you asked back.

Written to be cut

Assume the journalist will use two sentences, so make every sentence stand on its own. Lead with the strongest line. Keep it to 100 to 150 words unless they ask for more. Write the way a person talks, because it will be printed as speech. If a sentence would sound odd read aloud, it will read oddly on the page.

Plain English

Trade shorthand that is obvious to you is a barrier to a consumer reader. If a technical point matters, explain it simply in the quote itself. The journalist should not have to translate you, and they will not have time to.

Everything they need, attached

The comment is only half the job. The name and job title exactly as they should appear. High-resolution images, correctly credited, that match what you are talking about. Prices, with whether they include VAT. Stockist details. A journalist juggling ten requests will choose the response that is ready to run over the one that needs chasing, every time.

On time, every time

A deadline is a deadline. Getting a good answer in early is worth more than a perfect answer that arrives after the page has closed. Respect it once and you are useful. Respect it every time and you become the first person they call.

Not written by a machine

Journalists now see a lot of comment that has obviously been generated, and they can spot it in a line. It is generic, over-balanced and says nothing a reader could not guess. It goes straight in the bin, and it can quietly cost you the relationship. The point of expert comment is expertise. If a person who knows the subject has not written it, or at least read it and made it theirs, do not send it.

Why it matters

Expert comment is one of the most reliable ways to build a name in the press, because it compounds. Every good, usable quote makes you easier to say yes to next time. For the brands we work with, it is often the steady monthly coverage between launches that builds the reputation, not the launch itself.